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Judith Proctor ([personal profile] watervole) wrote2016-07-26 09:46 am
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Musing on writers and accuracy of research

I grew up on Robert Heinlein and a few other writers.

Heinlein, to a kid with a developing interest in science and the stars was wonderful.  His science was as accurate as was possible at the time his books were written.  His characters wrestled with how much mass they could fit on a spaceship without wrecking the acceleration, they had to consider inertia, trajectories and all sorts of stuff that invovled real science and real math.

I trusted him.  (Even at that age, I think I was aware that his stories with Martian canals were written at a time when Martian canals were believed to exist)  He never let me down.  I absorbed knowledge from his novels, and that was something I came to like.

I want novels both to entertain and inform.

(I remember in later years, being amazingly pleased by a couple of novels by Desmond Bagley that had really good geology and weather science in them)

And that is why I really HATE it when a novelist lies to me.  To me, it is incumbent on a writer to get their facts correct. I hate it in fan writing, even more in pro writing.

I know fan writers who take enormous pains to get facts correct. They will do research on dates, living conditions, language, etc.

And there are some professional writers who don't.

A friend of mine commented a couple of days ago about a romace writer who had bobcats and lynx in Regency England and it reminded me of a romance I read recently in which the Regency heroine kept a tank of lobsters.

I've kept fish myself.  I have no idea at all how a character living a long way from the sea (and thus unable to refill the tank with fresh sea water) would be able to keep the water clean (no electricty to power a filter pump).  She can't refill with fresh water because keeping the salinity correct is a problem even for modern marine tanks.  Also, how is she going to seal the tank?  What waterproof sealants exist in the Regency period that aren't toxic to marine life?

For a tank large enough to keep lobsters, she's  also going to need strong plate glass, not easy to come by in remote parts of Scotland.  You'd probably have to have it made specially and then transported without breakages along poor quality roads in a waggon.

except, of course, you couldn't get plate glass back then...  The processes to manufacture flat glass weren't around until the late 1840s and the early versions were very expensive.  Regency windows were made of little square panes of glass, roughly 15cm across.

So, I won't read anything by that writer again.

It's not just annoyance with things that are wrong, it's about suspension of disbelief.  If I catch a writer in an error or two, I stop believeing in the story.  If I no longer believe in the background, how can I believe in the characters?

I like reading Georgette Heyer and Patrick O'Brien, though both can be hard work on occasion.  Neither of them take any prisoners.  If you aren't prepared to work with a dictionary in hand, you'll miss a lot of the nuances.  (You can survive without, but it's more interesting with).  Both use language that is often missing from the dictionary on my Kindle -it really is a horribly basic dictionary - but it manages around 50% of the terms that I look up in Heyer.  I don't have O'Brien on Kindle, but luckily I do have A Sea of Words which is an incredibly useful guide/dictionary to his naval books (far more useful than online dictionaries and Google).

I've read both on occasion without any reference works to hand and enjoyed them, but the enjoyment is enhanced for me if I look up terms like barouche and sheer-hulk.  I get a better mental picture of the world in whch the characters live and how they interact with it.  I also learn some real history in the process.

Although I enjoy fantasy novels, they'll never be the staple of my reading.  They can only teach you about their own internal world and that knowledge doesn't carry over.

Fantasy can be easier for some writers - the background is invented   (though I can still be really annoyed by fantasy writers who break their own internal rules) and just as hard for others.  I like fantasy writers who want their world to work as a complete organism, and that can actually require a fair bit of research.  eg. The techniques for bulding a timber frame house will be exactly the same whether your world has dragons or not.

So, I'm a reserach junkie, and I like reading books by other research junkies - but they must still have strong characterisation and a good plot.  (Actually, thinking about two recent books I've enjoyed, I can be happy with a fairly simple storyline if the rest is good.)

[identity profile] eledonecirrhosa.livejournal.com 2016-07-26 10:54 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yes, with you on this. I recall a novel about the building of Stonehenge where the hero runs away from the tribe and survives by eating turtles and lizards! Or the science fiction one where the hero's best friend made the rank of general in 4 years. Or the... well you get the point!

I find that when I come across one of these glaring errors, I immediately start to doubt all the other facts the author has been stating. It's like watching QI on the telly. I'm a zoologist and know nothing about history of art or Argentinian cookery. But when they spout utter bollocks about zoology, I then instantly suspect anything they tell me about history of art or Argentinian cookery.
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[identity profile] watervole.livejournal.com 2016-07-26 11:50 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, totally!

Turtles! Near Stonehenge...

It's usually bad geology that gets me. I used to scream when fan writers had waterworn granite cave systems.

[identity profile] vjezkova.livejournal.com 2016-07-26 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I am not an accurate reader but the facts in fiction, if used properly, are very useful and inspiring, especially for an eternal learner of English.
I liked your post very much!

[identity profile] la-avispa.livejournal.com 2016-07-28 01:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh! That is why I love reading your fan fiction! I've learned a lot from you and haven't noticed any errors.

And there is a question I wanted to ask you when I was reading "Morgan". Have you read "Put off thy shoes" by Voynich? It's difficult to explain, what made me think you have. Just the mood of the story... And pigs, maybe...
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[identity profile] watervole.livejournal.com 2016-07-28 03:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! That's a really lovely compliment.

Thanks have to go to numerous friends who answered questions on everything from the correct forms to fill in to claim benefits, to the diseases of sheep.

Fandom is full of people who know all kinds of useful stuff.

No, I've never read Voynich.

[identity profile] rockwell-666.livejournal.com 2016-07-30 11:00 am (UTC)(link)
Many years ago, a friend wrote a story and chucked in a casual reference to a character playing Sonic the Hedgehog on a Gameboy.

She was very miffed when someone pointed out that Sonic is from Nintendo, not Sony, so they couldn't have been playing it.

She now checks details like this very carefully :-)
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[identity profile] watervole.livejournal.com 2016-07-30 06:36 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL.

I wouldn't have known either, but I'd have asked first.

Which weekend in the month is it that you're busy? Just thinking about gaming.