ext_50216 ([identity profile] temeres.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] watervole 2011-11-07 07:10 pm (UTC)

Second problem is that the writer occasionally drops into present tense for no apparent reason. I found this jarring and can only attribute it to poor editing.

Or author was thinking, "If John le Carre can get away with it why can't I?"



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